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She curls her tail
Around herself
And carefully
Grooms
A little white paw
And looks at me
So innocently
From the sheet
Of warm cookies
She lies upon
This isn't the best of my work, but I had to write it; I found my daughter's cat, Lily, who some of you have seen in my gallery, curled up quite comfortably on the stovetop, laying on a freshly baked tray of chocolate chip cookies! Luckilly, they were covered with paper towels.....what a brain damaged cat!!!!!
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:iconrachellynn89:
I really like this. I can picture it :D
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:iconerziban:
Thank you...if you look in my gallery, you will find a picture of the culprit...a little white and grey monster!
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Questingpoet Nov 8, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
LOL, always nice to read a light-hearted short poem too. Cats!! You gotta love em!
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:iconerziban:
She is so brain-damaged....She is the cat currently prominently displayed on my page...
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:icondruidoaks:
My goodness I don't understand why your poems don't have 1,000's of views but I don't understand people and their choices. Poems that are not very good or comprehensible get viewed and then work like yours which is real, and beautiful and soul and mind identifing have low views. You must be published and if not you should be!!!!!
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:iconerziban:
That is the kindest and sweetest compliment I have ever gotten! Thank you so much...I just write what I feel...it's my way to stay sane when life is on a rollercoaster!
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chrisntheboat Oct 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful cat cookies!
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:iconerziban:
She's one of the strangest cats I have ever known....:)
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chrisntheboat Oct 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:) That is cool
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:iconerziban:
Yep...keeps the boredom to a minimum!
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